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Simple yet Sad poem, tell me what you think?
Contributed by
joe89
on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 01:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Tonight is our night
Let’s dance till we drop
Your kisses are my fuel
Yet my heart, it says stop.
Am I ill from the madness?
My heart should say go
For some other reason
It begs to say no.
But I love you so much
This truly cannot be
My heart isn’t controlling
I was born to be free.
I push you away
To have a quick think
Whats wrong with me
Your eyes don’t blink
I suddenly realize
That I don’t miss your touch
A thing once much loved
Now not loved so much...
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joe89
... [
2006-09-08 13:45:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Simple yet Sad poem, tell me what you think?
(User Rating: 1 ) by StormyNites on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 04:03:42 PM AEST (User
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Its a wonderful poem..maybe sad but I found it more encouraging than that. Like showing the light at the end of a tunnel. Thank you for sharing. |
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