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Would anything change?
Contributed by
BSteel
on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 11:15:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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I'll break your teeth,
blaze the heat,
wake you up from a deep sleep,
your best dream,
only to descend again,
was you being me,
see I'm the King of the Ring,
i move people like John F. Kennedy,
probably get killed over jealousy,
irrevalenent negligance,
I live with no liability,
trying to round up all the haters,
that means no day is assured,
***** insurance,
live by destiny, so I feel I'm blessed for sure,
If I could prove heaven through words,
for a second or even a d ay,
I could prove anything,
but would anything change.
Copyright ©
BSteel
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2006-09-08 11:15:17]
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Re: Would anything change?
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 02:04:39 PM AEST
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hmmmm...this was really good. Was it like a rap? I could hear it being one. But overall, even if it wasn't a rap, I liked it just as much. Great Write and great thoughts as well.
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Re: Would anything change?
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by topcatcrowther on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 06:20:44 PM AEST
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| yeh, i see a rap too. But I like your choice in words. |
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