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Trapped
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 03:02:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The dark wood is now where I reside,
With evil demons at my side,
The trees with gnarled and twisted branches,
Prevent me now from taking chances,
The moon no more gives me light,
It is dark and lonely here,
The jackal and the devil within,
Are my only friends I fear,
The raging river twists and turns,
And no bridges can I cross,
I am marooned in hell you see,
I am broken,alone and lost,
The creatures roaming in the night,
They hunt and torture me,
Infiltrate my weary mind,
Now only nightmares do I see,
The snares are all about me now
I've been consumed by the demons kiss,
No hope for me, For I have entered,
The darkness of the abyss
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jerseysue
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2006-09-08 03:02:57]
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Re: Trapped
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 03:10:46 AM AEST
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Very, very sad.
Great writing tho.
Are you alright, my friend?
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Trapped
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by StormyNites on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 03:41:51 AM AEST
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| What a very emotional poem and very well written..thoughts are with you |
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Re: Trapped
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by midian on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 03:44:10 AM AEST
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Awesome poem loved every second,
so full of sadness you put across this poem very well x
~x~Before the gates of, Heaven & Hell~x~ |
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Re: Trapped
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 04:43:53 AM AEST
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| Really great poem Sue, you are so versatile your poems can swing from real happiness to sadness, but thats how human emotions are.. Can relate to your poem..xxx |
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Re: Trapped
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by twbanter on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 08:21:15 AM AEST
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Dark and desperate! Very creative, and good flow! I felt the lonlyness and hopelessness there. I hope it's not real for you? The sun will shine through!
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Re: Trapped
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 08:32:50 AM AEST
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I pray we have experienced a theoretical write from "the abyss" of your imagination. I just saw your picture on your page and really wanna relish in that beautiful smile of happiness. Hang in there, little buddy. Fantastic write.
wabl
KenMoore
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Oh, that picture helps m' poem. Almost had ya pictured as a honey blonde brit buddy. |
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Re: Trapped
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:59:37 PM AEST
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I felt this my friend... It is very good work...
Depressing but Good... No Great...
Sue Thank You for sharing this....
I think I need a drink now :D J/K
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