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Song Of Shadows
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-09-07 23:09:13]
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:33:23 PM AEST
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Good work Nazzy.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:38:22 AM AEST
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A fine piece, Scott. I like that last stanza especially. I think the choice to place 'to' on the end of the penultimate line was a good one, as it makes the final line more honed and to the point; a good thing for final lines to be.
Keep it up!
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 11:53:26 AM AEST
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Will Scott your writes never disappoint.
again you did an amazing job.
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by twbanter on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:39:45 PM AEST
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Eerie, spectral, and flowing. That was a great lttle write Scott. I enjoyed that immensely!
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by twbanter on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:40:46 PM AEST
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Eerie, spectral, and flowing. That was a great lttle write Scott. I enjoyed that immensely!
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 06:53:13 PM AEST
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.. and what an incredible voice it IS snazzy!!!!!
Exceptional write, my dear friend. The title is superbly noteworthy.
I see you in this .. I feel you in this. Maybe more
than any other I've read .. it's perfect.
Hoping you are doing great!
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Re: Song Of Shadows
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 03:15:09 PM AEST
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Naz,
"He reaches out in voice and song...." whether they listen is not what matters it appears to me. Rather it matters if they listen to whom he sings...."Another not quite there."......Spirit reaching out through mode of song and gift of voice
Well done Nazzy,
Will/Terry |
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