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circles are never perfect
Contributed by
johndough111
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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This road is a circle
It is and old dirt road
When we walk on it we always stir up debris
We never get anywhere
and we pretend to not care
But we feel like we’re too old now
You tell me that we should both grow
This road is a circle, and it isn’t perfect
It is uncomfortable, fruitless, and mostly confusing
But for some strange reason,
I would rather stay and travel this treacherous road together
Then take the easy path and loose you forever.
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2003-02-13 10:00:00]
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Re: circles are never perfect
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by ed on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:17:48 AM AEST
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| I liked this. Simple and well written. Thanks |
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Re: circles are never perfect
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:17:14 PM AEST
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ah, such as life sometimes is....
love the last two lines :) |
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Re: circles are never perfect
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by lilch4ever on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:56:43 PM AEST
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| like this poem very good. Nice write. |
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