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In bed at night
Contributed by
annoiosa
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Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I used to lay in bed at night
And dream about a man.
Someone that would love me,
Someone to hold my hand.
I used to lay in bed at night
And pretend that he was too.
With his arm around me tight,
(Just the way you do).
Now I lay in bed at night,
My heart beating at a fast pace.
Because the man I used to dream about,
Finally has a face.
Copyright ©
annoiosa
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2006-09-07 13:56:16]
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Re: In bed at night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 02:13:16 PM AEST
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Good for you (for the face)! And you penned it so sweetly. Again, your simplicity of write is refreshing. Got another?
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: In bed at night
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:14:04 PM AEST
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| Nothing can be better than dreams come true...nicely done ! :) |
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Re: In bed at night
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:27:36 PM AEST
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| Aw, so cute! Short and simple but sweet!! Great job rhyming and congrats =) |
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Re: In bed at night
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 05:28:34 AM AEST
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| So glad your dream came true, proves they can... Lovely poem. xxxx |
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Re: In bed at night
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 01:46:10 AM AEST
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I'm glad you've found that person - they're hard to come by! I'm still in a big bed, wondering if I'll ever roll over and find a warm hand waiting for mine.
Nice write!
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