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silently crying
Contributed by
midian
on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 09:00:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i stand Silently crying,
Am i slowly dying?
why cant i feel?
why is this life surreal,
nothings changed.
but my lifes rearranged!
around everything ,
that they want me to be.
how is it , i've lost part of me.
i'm not the same
I'm trapped in a cage
dying to break free
before i lose all of me
what can i do
where can i turn
if everyway i run
i always seem to burn
in the fires of self hatred
in the flames of parinoia
what i pray has become of me ?
an empty shell, nothing left to see
Hollow and broken
now only a token
of better days past
unfortunate they didnt last
Silently crying
now i know im dying
no hope in me
this is the last of me
Copyright ©
midian
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2006-09-07 09:00:23]
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Re: silently crying
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:04:05 PM AEST
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| Full of emotion....nicely written ! |
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Re: silently crying
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:59:52 PM AEST
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| I believe we've all been, at many times in our being, where you were at this write. Perhaps its the genuine of us chopped up and bastardized by political, religious and monetary "correctness" that recreates us all as "empty shells." Nice write! |
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Re: silently crying
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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Well my first thought is you have a very great gift in your hands as your writing is awesome.
Hold onto that a while.
luv, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: silently crying
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 05:48:21 AM AEST
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| I can relate to your feelings, we all do at times feel this way.. Well written you explain it so well. xxx |
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