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My Heavenly Star
Contributed by
ManowarManiac
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With the captivating brilliance
of the beauty within your eyes
Billions of stars in the heavens
shine valiantly through the night
The compass of my unguided soul
would be forever thrust asunder
If I was never again able to see
such a bold and wonderful sight
One time when I gazed upward
deeply into the blackened abyss
I witnessed a shooting star race
across the sky in a blaze of glory
Though remaining expressionless
knowing it's days were numbered
A hopeless feeling grew within me
as I witnessed it tell it's final story
A shooting star somehow relates
to feelings of love here on earth
As it is with grief I hang my head
when fate calls on them to depart
An angel that leaves an impression
as you have always soared up high
The loving presence you portray
definitely impacted my steel heart
When God decided to create you
he made the brightest star of all
you still outshine all of the others
through such an ever giving soul
When I begin to miss you my star
all I have to do is look at the sky
The grace radiating through you
will last forever to make me whole
Copyright ©
ManowarManiac
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2003-02-13 09:00:00]
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Re: My Heavenly Star
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:47:23 AM AEST
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thank you thank you
for your inspiring poem
it has such warmth and positivtiy
awesome
well done
peace be yuor journey from
riverofwords
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Re: My Heavenly Star
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:34:10 AM AEST
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| This was so beautifully done,The words were so inspirational! Great write,Hope to see more of yours! Christina |
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Re: My Heavenly Star
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by ManowarManiac on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM AEST
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| Thanx riverofwords, I appreciate your kind comment. I will be sure and read some of your writings. |
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Re: My Heavenly Star
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by ManowarManiac on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:41:44 PM AEST
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| You are so sweet Christina, I have entered a few other poems if you want to read them just look into my archive. Thanx again, Paul |
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