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A raging typhoon
Contributed by
lord_sogi
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Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:22:10 AM in AEST
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There in the distance is a raging typhoon,
Can no one see it or hear?
The luminous waves are coming soon,
So overwhelming that I can not bear.
As it approaches I can see flames,
They are building stronger,
Maybe god is just playing games,
Until we are no longer.
A simple solitude,
We try to hide ourselves from danger,
From anything that is lewd,
But in itself we become a stranger.
Those crashing waves rumble loudly,
We pretend that they are not there.
We tell ourselves we are not cowardly,
But we show our fear.
I can see the sky so vivid,
But I can no longer stand,
Life no longer seems lucid,
Death becomes quicksand.
As I prepare for my departure,
I slowly feel renewed strength
Like a small rapture,
At the end’s length.
Somehow I am alive,
But I am still weak,
Although I have survived,
I know my spirit is meek.
I can sense another wave
This time it has grown,
I can see my early grave,
My soul is all alone.
Is this the end for me?
Do I sit here in dismayed?
Nothing left to see,
As my soul slowly fade?
Or do I rise?
Learning from my fall,
And reach toward the skies,
Above the coming squall.
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Re: A raging typhoon
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:33:22 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of wisdom, anguish-n-hope.
Very powerfull writing.
huggs,
emy
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Re: A raging typhoon
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 08:48:36 AM AEST
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| Great write telling of the constant struggle to survive the pains and stress that come. It's the spirit within that conquers - you've written that truth so well. |
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Re: A raging typhoon
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 09:00:34 PM AEST
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| lots of images shot through my mind..good job. |
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Re: A raging typhoon
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by True on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 10:46:28 AM AEST
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| I like it. A good display of the struggle of the soul to survive. |
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Re: A raging typhoon
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:22:05 PM AEST
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nice same as you learned from your fall
i learned that you are a good poet and should keep writing it will help the nightmares of life fade into the paper instead of your head
you just keep on writing |
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