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Bad Ending
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I slit my wrists,
and bleed on your stone,
I can hear you beating 6ft under,
scratching at your new home,
Now you know,
All my threats were true,
Ha, you didnt believe me,
Guess ya didnt realize I hated you,
Well its too late now,
This couldve been avoided,
but no you chose to save your 'pride,'
I will never forget, the day you died,
By now your probably lightheaded,
Might wanna slow tour breathing down,
Make your air last as long as it can,
This thought makes me smile, not like you made me frown...
I shed one lonely tear,
As I walk away alone and free,
Yes loved you once
But I guess it wasnt meant to be...
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2003-02-13 08:30:00]
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Re: Bad Ending
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:10:12 AM AEST
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| Hang in there you will find happiness one day,It maybe right in front of you & you dont know it! Christina |
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Re: Bad Ending
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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I agree with Christina soon happiness will come... You have such a talent in writing a talent rarely seen and rarer still in one so young. Keep on writing and keep on fighting. Remember I'm here for you.
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