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Domestic Abuse
Contributed by
lilbabe
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Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:28:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Create my actions
Through your hate
Call it love,
I'll take the bait
Lure me in
Sleep with me
Feel no emotion,
No pain or empathy
Hurt this fragile body
Break every little bone
Do it when you're sober,
Even drunk or stoned
Tell me I deserved it
I have bathed in sin
Another reason to hit me
Go ahead, do it again
Too weak to fight
Or feel any pain
I'll just hide my face and bruises
Swallowed by my shame
Copyright ©
lilbabe
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2006-09-06 21:28:24]
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Re: Domestic Abuse
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 10:04:47 PM AEST
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Unfortunatly this happens way to often.
Great wrting.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Domestic Abuse
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:33:48 PM AEST
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hoping this is just your muse talking; if not run like hell to a shelter.
mary |
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Re: Domestic Abuse
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:27:24 PM AEST
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| Very well-written, I love the defiance. And in response to your comment on my write....keep hanging in there. |
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Re: Domestic Abuse
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by soulsearching43 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:23:06 PM AEST
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very powerful stuff beautifully written
would you check out The first wife and let me know what you think
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