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the words you stained
Contributed by
Seeker
on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:05:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you closed the door
i closed my eyes,
to see no more
of your disguise
to feel no more
of your pretence.
you knew before
false innocence.
i hear the words
that people say,
my grief gets worse
each empty day
the scars you left,
the words you stained,
without your theft
i'm self-contained,
i'm self-controlled
until i face
a new recall
of your disgrace
a new flashback,
a face, a word,
and i am racked
dethroned and hurt.
i hit the stone.
you went astray.
my world is gone.
i am here to stay.
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Seeker
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2006-09-06 21:05:51]
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Re: the words you stained
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 09:00:17 AM AEST
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| BRAVA!!!!! Magnificent! this poem is moving and rythmical...Very VERY good work! Keep it up! ^_^ |
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Re: the words you stained
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:23:10 PM AEST
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| Oh Great job! Great rhyming, rhythm and word choice! |
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