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Cutting
Contributed by
lil_pup91
on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 08:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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The blade flashes in the light
pressed to the skin
slowly drawn across
a thin red line of blood comes in
take the blade away
reflective silver burdened with red
blood starts seeping to the surface
pooling around the slice
turn it upside down
watching
slowly each drop as it
falls to the ground
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lil_pup91
... [
2006-09-06 20:58:07]
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Re: Cutting
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:03:25 PM AEST
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| Beautiful...Amazing...Touching |
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Re: Cutting
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:24:08 PM AEST
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your not alone... even though i know this isnt the answer i still find myself there...
great write! I understand you |
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Re: Cutting
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:35:53 PM AEST
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| awwww..ever need to talk; here I am. |
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Re: Cutting
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:49:00 PM AEST
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Definitely touching.
This is a great piece and describes the scene well.
I would tell you to not do this to yourself, but I'm not much of an example myself.
Great write. |
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Re: Cutting
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by ashleigh on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 06:24:01 PM AEST
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| Reminds me of darker times... Very touching. Keep it up. |
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