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I lick my wounds 'til i'm fed
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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playfully twitching
remember the signs
of blue face and switching
from life to flat-lines
carry me home to the paint that's still wet
and hugs that don't grip but slip and regret
i can't see her face cause it hasn't stopped raining
i feel my heart slow as our tears are done trading
lick wounds til i'm fed
but never quite full
i'm hungry she said
my flesh she will pull
drag me back to my basement of gray
shed my skin loveless you know that i'll stay
the paintings are mine and they sell to the tired
souls who can't sing and minds not admired
feed me your seeds
i squawk from a cage
i'm full of no needs
but I drink to fuel rage
break my wings...
...my love.
dw
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Re: I lick my wounds 'til i'm fed
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by Seeker on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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| though too pathetic at some phrases, this poem contains non-trivial images and descriptions. made me shiver. thanks. |
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Re: I lick my wounds 'til i'm fed
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:43:37 PM AEST
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| this was sad..good but sad. |
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Re: I lick my wounds 'til i'm fed
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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| This is one of the most vivid poems i've read on this site for a while. It made me shiver! Beautiful and sad. Souls who can't sinf and minds not admired-genius! x |
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Re: I lick my wounds 'til i'm fed
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 12:33:48 PM AEST
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This was amazing... Well worded and put together... I like the verse that starts:
Lick wounds til i'm fed.... all together an amazing poem...
Take care
christina |
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