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Relentlessly
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The hands on the clock move so fast
They do not seem like hands at all
They’re like feet that walk in circles
For so long that things change
And alternatively, they remain the same
The acorn on the ground became a tree
The man you knew, grew old
And (eventually) died
And the scar you got as a kid
Never went away
But those feet never stopped to rest
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2006-09-06 15:25:58]
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Re: Relentlessly
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:19:03 AM AEST
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Very good write.
Like a proverb.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Relentlessly
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by ShaonKra on
Thursday, 5th March 2009 @ 04:26:06 AM AEST
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It's ok, would like to hear it rhyming though
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