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Hidden
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:17:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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She flips her hair,
With a hand on her hip.
Squints in the light,
Curling her lips.
Her laugh so innocent,
She just wants to have fun.
She beams with joy,
As bright as the sun.
Everyones friend,
An attractive magnet.
They all hear her name,
Not one person hasn't.
A star on the field,
A pro on the court.
Miss America while also
The Girl Next Door.
Her words so light,
Smile so true.
They envy her so,
If only they knew.
A family that cares,
Money to get by.
So why's she determined,
To not let herself cry?
A tear would be week,
But even the best fall down.
But she's known to be perfect,
Now allowed one frown.
Her own strict rules
Keep her immune to pain.
Any kind of bloodshed
Is all part of the game.
So pages of game plans
Written in red,
Smeared every way,
No tears will she shed.
As long as the public
Sees her the same,
Her book will go on,
As she plays her sick games.
By day she's a star,
But by night she's real.
Just assuring herself
That she can still feel.
Copyright ©
Drapes
... [
2006-09-06 15:17:17]
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Re: Hidden
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 08:55:44 PM AEST
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I loved the poem..it was great..
One thing though...I think you were going for weak not week...if you want to change it..
great write though |
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Re: Hidden
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by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:45:25 PM AEST
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your in middle school?? your writing is so...beautiful. but age is not what counts.
you are very talented.
lex |
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Re: Hidden
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:26:38 AM AEST
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wow!
this one rocks.
It jus reaches out grabs the reader and once you've read it u know u've read something.
Great work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hidden
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 02:56:19 PM AEST
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so many wear masks but what matters is how we see ourselves when we are alone w/ that mirror
It is such a pleasure reading your work such talent is rare.
Shari |
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