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Paradise
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 10:33:21 AM in AEST
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Daffodils in spring, roses in june,
each has its month to grow and to bloom.
we have our time to live and to die,
we are part of the world, the stars in the sky,
a light from the moon, a beam from the sun,
nurtured from a seed, new life has begun,
our own star is waiting for us in the sky,
until the day dawns for us to fly,
so high we fly, where no mans been,
so beautiful, only seen in dreams,
enfolded in light, no fear and pain,
part of paradise again...
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lillyjane
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Re: Paradise
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:47:22 AM AEST
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| A beautiful view, Lilly, and a beautiful write. Perhaps it may not be life after "death" though. Perhaps it's life after life and we come back to "paradise" as a daffodil or a rose here on earth with no fear or pain. Either way I'm excited about what will come and I too believe fear and pain are not part of the "enfolding light" of paradise! Excellent work. |
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Re: Paradise
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:29:11 PM AEST
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| Yes I believe we go some where, I am of the opinion we return to earth as someone else. ha ha saying that, I hope I have a better life next time. Lovely poem, yes this paradise would be nice. Sue x |
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Re: Paradise
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by twbanter on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:51:23 PM AEST
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Wooowhooo! Lilly that was great. I see everything as part of well, an essence. From whence we come, live now still, and return. Nothing truly dies, it just changes...
Ya I'm whacked. 5 STARS on this one!
Tom W
PS For some reason, I can't get the rest of the awakening to go through.... Don't understand it....(and it's the best parts!) |
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Re: Paradise
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by wrdz on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 05:06:03 PM AEST
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| This one should open some eyes. Nice work, Lilly. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Paradise
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:37:53 PM AEST
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I echo the sentiments of the poets before me ..
completely beautiful and hopeful, lilly.
Your words bring with them a soft comfort.
~Breezy |
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Re: Paradise
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:43:09 AM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy
good work. |
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Re: Paradise
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:13:55 PM AEST
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'a light from the moon, a beam from the sun,
nurtured from a seed, new life has begun,
our own star is waiting for us in the sky,
until the day dawns for us to fly,'
How magical Lillyjane, this poem is so beautiful. You are very special.xxx
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Re: Paradise
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by jmakuer on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 04:35:27 PM AEST
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| opinion is always yours and you are entitle to it, but this, i must admit is more than an opinion, and or thoughts, its deeper than you thought it might have been, and it means alot to others than you thought it would. well done love it. |
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Re: Paradise
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by jmakuer on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 04:43:21 PM AEST
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| opinion is always yours and you are entitle to it, but this, i must admit is more than an opinion, and or thoughts, its deeper than you thought it might have been, and it means alot to others than you thought it would. well done love it. |
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Re: Paradise
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by trueecho on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 11:56:44 AM AEST
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| that was positive and beautiful..thank you |
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