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Deadly bliss..........
Contributed by
vampirequeen35
on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:17:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The dark engulfs my silent world
The glow from city lights afar
Swallow whole a falling star
I stare into the black I love
an angel stands in front of me
His eyes are as deep as the night sky
but his looks are full of lies
and any word from his mouth
can make me laugh or cry
I'm not allowed to have my peace
I search the darkness aimlessly
And know not what I seek
My effort seems to be in vain
Through the mist as if a dream
He forms within my sight
With glowing eyes and arms outstretched
He pushes back the night
No words escape his blood red lips
And yet he calls to me
He traps me with seductive stare
He has the most powerful effect
he didn't have to ask
My passion my dark tainted demon
your red crimson ruby kiss
You make my blood sing in estasy
I surrender in total submission
A final kiss of profound love
Your hands in my hair
Your lips on my flesh
Your teeth cold and sharp
Against the hot and bitter flood
Of my mortal life
In acts of carnal pleasure
rocking me with your thrust
our mind locked in body and soul
in blissful ecstasy
As we dance dangerously
I am yours eternally
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2006-09-06 04:17:57]
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Re: Deadly bliss..........
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 10:49:52 AM AEST
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| Love this, you commented on my try at dark poetry but I cant compete with yours.. xxx |
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Re: Deadly bliss..........
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 12:07:06 PM AEST
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Fantastic, Karen. Yeah, I read Lilly's and she did a good job on her first dark, but many of yours are declarations of Queenliness of Darkness. Always enjoy delving into darkness with your writes. Kinda like, the twilight zone!
Had fun "dancing dangerously" with you.
wabl
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Re: Deadly bliss..........
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:20:59 PM AEST
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"You make my blood sing in estasy"
WOW, K!!! What a line!!!
Beautifully and darkly scrumptious write, my friend!
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Deadly bliss..........
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 07:00:45 PM AEST
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some spicy last few lines luv~
great write.. as always~
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