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Believe
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:16:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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When I get to my final destination…
And you ponder God’s creation…
Torment and anger fills your heart…
Thinking my death was cruel from the start…
I died for you and yours…
To cleanse you from your earthly woes…
Don’t hold your feelings of discontent…
For those who did harm, it’s not what they meant…
For as I told my father it’s true…
They know not what they do…
Just follow my ways and lead a good existence…
For the pearly gates are large for such a small fence…
Don’t think bad thoughts or feel down…
Just hold me in your heart and come around…
Keep your head up and never look back…
For if you do your time will slack…
My time her was short, a mere 33 years…
Don’t sob or cry. Don’t shed any tears…
They did not kill me. It was my father’s way…
Lose all bad thoughts and lose them today…
Please keep in mind what I gave was free...
Just please don't forsake me..
You may find your wrong in your perception…
Because I gave hope with my resurrection…
So you and yours will one day see…
Your souls will fly so carefree…
Believe in me… For one day I'll come again...
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Re: Believe
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by wrdz on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:57:40 PM AEST
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| Only small spelling errors, but other than that, the subject matter cancels them out. Some say seeing is believing, but in reality, believing will mean we will be able to see. Very good work. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Believe
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:46:30 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful way of saying this...thank you so much...H&K |
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