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Passion Nevermore
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 11:53:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We woke, the sun was in the sky
and the face of Heaven was there..
but silence all about us lie
that morning in the air.
I asked your love: "Where have you been
since the sun set in the west?
I know not where your feet have gone,
nor what has been your quest.
Where were you when Orion passed
below the land and sea?
For all the distant stars are gone...
have you followed them for me?
Where have you been - nepenthe,
since tides upon the shore..
You've gently rocked our love to sleep
in passion nevermore."
B
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Man_On_High
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2006-09-05 23:53:41]
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 11:57:22 PM AEST
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Wow! friend. u have it goung on in this awesome write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by vampirequeen35 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 12:40:59 AM AEST
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wow Billy that was absalutely sad and beautiful write.thanks for sharing
hugs
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:14:05 AM AEST
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What a bittersweet, sad and soulful write.
Feelings and emotions come through well in this poem. Enjoyed it very much. Sue x |
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by Winterland on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:10:45 AM AEST
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So very beautiful. Thank you for a wonderful start to my day.
Jennifer |
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:48:06 PM AEST
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aw, you are a complete sweetheart... you know this, yes? lol
How softly beautiful, although awash with a terrible
hollow feeling ... an emptiness where something more
once dwelt. Sad, dearest. But, oh my, how you have
captured the emotion so perfectly. A brilliant piece.
Absolute perfection~
~Breezy
While Orion gently lights the night
I embrace your warmth as before
Keeping you in my heart and soul
With passion forevermore .. |
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:31:32 PM AEST
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Not knowing about such things is one way to surely drive a man insane
Luck for us, your insanity bleeds these fresh words, capturing for all of us, what we already knew.
Stimulating write
Nice as always
your fan- |
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 09:20:56 AM AEST
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You have an unbelievable talent for saying "goodbye" and "wish you were here" in the same magnificent piece!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 03:00:25 PM AEST
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ooo. the last line is just o die for!
i wither in jealousy...you're good.
xXx
~kei
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Re: Passion Nevermore
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 08:11:48 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful Billy.
The quaint presence of sadness , your words- simply spell bounding.
The most enjoyable piece of poetry I have read in a LONG time.
You are delightful.
( i miss you. )
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