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Upon A Cloud
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 09:50:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Upon A Cloud
Upon a cloud a dangling
Looking down upon destiny and fate
A solitary figure alone wonders
"How much longer must I wait?"
Where is my angel?
The completion of my heart?
How much longer must I wait?
Will we be apart?
How long is a lifetime?
Is it naught but a hundred years?
Then why does it seem?
I've cried an eternity of tears?
How long till you remember?
How long til I hold you again?
How long til our spirits?
Once more begin
Dancing through the universe
Atop Saturn's rings
In each others arms
As my heart passionately sings
To the heart of my angel
The one always meant to be
The angel I've loved
Forever eternally!
Russ
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2006-09-05 21:50:05]
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Re: Upon A Cloud
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 11:27:37 PM AEST
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I hear every word u say and it's said very good!
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Re: Upon A Cloud
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 05:44:39 PM AEST
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well spoken and from the heart. It's very, very good.
How long is a lifetime?
Is it naught but a hundred years?
Then why does it seem?
I've cried an eternity of tears?
that, i find is especially well put together.
keep it up |
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