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By the Luminescent Light
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 05:30:03 PM in AEST
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By the luminescent light
I try to transform this sickness to words
is it just the darkness I am letting in?
The real sickness is love
I see you attaching to another
Feeling abandoned
Not even my closest demons can dissolve this isolation
Whilst others drift at the edge
It is you that brings me undone
It is you that rips out the water from my veins
The ice that runs in place of blood
Is only melted by the fire of our bond
As miles pour water to kill our light
She runs to the river to fill another bucket
Its not her you claim
But I know that all is lost to a girl in crisis
Me, the woman in death, neglected to remember
Nothing is forever
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2006-09-05 17:30:03]
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Re: By the Luminescent Light
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 05:39:15 PM AEST
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The sentiment so caressing to a soul so sad.
very well expressed |
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Re: By the Luminescent Light
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by TwistedCage on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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A little abstract, and somewhat vague, but I dug it that way. Your words still created a very clear picture..
Well done, |
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