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It All Dies
Contributed by
razrXbldXrmnc
on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 03:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You lied to me
You cried to me
I lied for you
I cried for you
You used me
You abused me
I fell for your lies
I listened to your cries
As slowly inside,
It all dies
But I have grown wise,
As you are now the person I despise.
You got under my skin,
You thought you would win
Thought you would get away free from sin
But now I have made the tables spin.
You are now the the one being decieved.
It's finally time I feel relieved.
You played games with my head,
And now all I see is RED.
Too much I feel I have bled
I've worried enough over the things you said.
It's too late now, you have made your bed.
And now to me, you are way past dead.
To me you have committed a crime,
And I'm sorry I have wasted all this time.
But finally I see,
Exactly what you have done to me.
You have made me bleed,
You have planted a seed
From which my anger will feed,
Until the day that I die,
All because I listened to you cry.
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2006-09-05 15:08:09]
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Re: It All Dies
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 04:22:30 PM AEST
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Very angry
yeah
but strong
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Re: It All Dies
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 07:31:59 PM AEST
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very nice, angry, it's awesome. i wrote something that sounded like that.."too late" but it was more of a sad version. i loved yours though, totally can relate. great work.
--talli |
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Re: It All Dies
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by Skinney86 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:11:02 PM AEST
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| very angry and the words seem like they come straight from the heart. Nice rhymes, a little to much rhyming at the start but it worked its way out at the end. Great write |
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Re: It All Dies
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by beautiful_loser on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:37:11 AM AEST
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| loved your poem, and everything about it. Im sure many can relate to it, thanks for posting it. |
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