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lies,love and a neon nightlight
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:21:23 PM in AEST
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in this darkened soul wondering threw lost images of old love and older hate
feeling lost and dragged like a fish on a hook trying to fight the will to die
cold metal in my hand one flash and a life time of hurt gone without a trace
slowly i crawl off the floor of regreat and imbrace the future on understanding
like a cold hand of death to close to not notice a inner voice screams from within
live it says live for the way the flowers grow bloom not rot grow not die
rmemeber that in time of need there was always someone there
not this empty that you feel now and he is right the voice tell truth
in this neon world
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2006-09-05 13:21:23]
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Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 06:17:42 PM AEST
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I like it. not quite up to speed on what you're saying.
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Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:32:54 PM AEST
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Hey brother, Good to see you posting. The write is exquisite in it's message. I do like how you write from your heart and your experiences in this rough life, you've been surviving. (Yeah, man. You are a survivor) Would love to see you take care of those spelling boo-boos. But, that's okay man. The content is good, really good. You know I'm a fan.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:38:04 PM AEST
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Excellent flow
I like the way it flows. |
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