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Silent Words Spoken
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:13:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Staring out the window once again,
watching the day pass,
I have nothing to say.
My thoughts come rushing through too fast to comprehend,
so I'll sit and stare,
wondering why
I...
just...
can't...
get...
it...
together.
I'm a mere blank in society.
I have no opinions,
no questions,
no care about the world...
I'm a void within a void.
My unfelt feelings floating in waves.
My written words scream,
and you may hear,
though doubtful...
They don't scream that loud
for fear of drawing attention to myself.
Staring out the window once again...
watching the day pass,
I have nothing to say,
except...
I'm waiting for you to unlock my soul,
to see me as I am,
silent, meek and humble,
that my written word speaks louder than my spoken word.
My sighs are my words spoken
and my heartbreak is on this page.
~Rhiannon
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Uncertain_Oblivion
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2006-09-05 13:13:13]
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Re: Silent Words Spoken
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by aniT on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:54:22 PM AEST
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| I love ur poem. Alot of people feel like that. |
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Re: Silent Words Spoken
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 06:21:28 PM AEST
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it is cool how you you put this.
i feel your written word |
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Re: Silent Words Spoken
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by TwistedCage on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:26:05 PM AEST
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I liked this one a lot, Rhia. You sound so empty, but there is beauty in emptyness, and a longing in recognition. I feel your words deeply, and they make me sad, but they also allow me to see your beauty, along with a hearty sting to the senses.
Thank you for sharing this...it was beautiful!
Much Love, |
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Re: Silent Words Spoken
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:07:37 PM AEST
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First of all, I love your name. That is one of my favorite songs by Fleetwood Mac..Rhiannon. Okay, now the poem....fantastic write. I've stared out that same friggen window. You've written some great stuff here. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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