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i cant hate
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:30:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I look into your eyes
I see your pain
your sarrow
really
I love you too
but we're not right
or so I thaught
without you
I seem to fall apart
but still held together
by thaughts of you
I can see why you wouldn't want to talk to me
I broke your heart
I cannot mend it
because of you
I experienced love
but it is you
who keeps me up at night
your thaughts bring me unwanted pain
and
your eyes
kill me
you make me feel guilty
like somehow I should pay
like I did something wrong
when I see my reflection
and look into my eyes
I see only
lonely emptyness
I want to cry
I want to scream
I want to die
just die
nothing more
just let my soal disappear
and die
releave the guilt
the sarrow
the emptyness
I can't hate you any more
go ahead
hate me
but I can't hate you any more
I just hope
one day
you find everything you want
everything you're looking for
me
I'm lost forever
had your chance
we both screwed it up
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
... [
2006-09-04 12:30:27]
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Re: i cant hate
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by lord_sogi on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:59:05 PM AEST
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| well quick spelling correction, soal=soul, thaught=thought. Besides that it was a nice little poem, and well yeah I agree hating does just bring too much pain. Seems like a reverse of the other poems I read, that talk about someone breaking their heart. Sooo good job on showing this side |
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Re: i cant hate
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 02:38:15 PM AEST
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| i liked the inital concept. You have a few spelling problems her and there. This seems more like a free association poem, which is alright, there quite benifical in venting out frustrations and that. I really liked it, was well written, well done. |
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Re: i cant hate
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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| Oh I really liked it! That's just how I'm feeling right now... And it will get better...right? Great write! |
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