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A topical heart breaker
Contributed by
keyonwifey
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Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 03:37:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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stand... just stand n look at her, just feel her for the moment n neva forget, cuz thats the last time ur breathe the same breath.
Look at the woman who loved you n now doesnt even want to know u. What makes u a man to lie to her, to cheat on her, to watch her cry..... just stand n look at her.... n if u love her simply just walk away, but if u neva want to love her walk ova there n comfort her.... tell her how sorry you are.....Men just stand for one moment n look at... look at her. Now ask yourself do u love her
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Re: A topical heart breaker
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:09:22 AM AEST (User
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Nice but the shortcuts to me took away from the poems..instead of really getting into it , I found myself looking only at the shortcuts.
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