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The End
Contributed by
Gayla
on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:12:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silence sweeps across the empty street
and paralyzes my cold body
as I gasp for this world's toxic air.
This emptiness breaks the dead silence
as I let out a deafening scream
for help but no one hears me.
My heart is frozen.
My skin is red.
My bones are shaking.
This is the end.
These scratches are burning
and my blood is screaming to set it free,
now watch the blood pour out of me.
The skin on my wrists is so thin.
When the skin is red,
you'll know that I'm dead.
It all starts, with the arrow going through the heart.
IT RIPS THE INSIDES APART!
It all ends, with the heart unable to mend.
NEVER LOVE AGAIN!
Copyright ©
Gayla
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2006-09-04 00:12:32]
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Re: The End
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:30:40 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written. One can feel the pain.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: The End
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by Aaron8124 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 04:33:10 PM AEST
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| I love this poem and I know about the underlying issue.:( seek help if you need it love, it helped me a lot *hugs* |
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Re: The End
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by fanniesson on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:49:44 PM AEST
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Well I have to admit you do get your point across
in this piece.
The last line does put it all together nicely .
great read here |
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