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Those Words (A Conversation Opener)

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 08:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems






Amid the many voices past and present
‘Cross the miles and through Time’s open door,
The words I needed most to hold within me
Were offered as perfectly as they’d been before

And nothing mattered anymore, save the
Beauty of heartfelt expression between pauses
And his simple, stalwart statement of condition
That had required no explanation of its cause

For without the flaw of timidity or hesitation
And with the fervor of a passion unrestrained,
He again imparted those words most poetic
And everything and nothing in me changed

I would maintain the relentlessness of falling
Is ever apparent once that truest truth has come
For a heart is lifted and the night is brightened
As if the moon had collided with the sun

Still, I come undone with each repeated hearing,
Above the commotion or in our quietude,
And never will it not thrill as it did the first time...

Not, my darling, when it comes from you






Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2006-09-03 20:03:57]
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Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 08:18:27 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie .. oh my GOSH!! This is perfection!!

That last line is so positively beautiful and how I do adore the fact that you italicized it and gave
it a LONE place of distinction. There are many things I could mention here, but the one I believe
most pertinent is that we all long to hear and share certain things with those we love and when
those particular words or phrase pass from our lips, it seems, the world is stilled to listen.
Our hearts race and stop all at once; our minds fill with the most gloriously gratifying thoughts
and we can hardly tempt ourselves into a patience that looks forward to all that is forthcoming ..

I know this .. I know it intimately, dearest friend. Thank you for this piece that so
moveth my heart and stirreth my soul. You have penned what I have often "thought".
And I SO love that you can do that ..

~Breezy
(smiling and clutching this particular piece ..)


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:58:20 PM AEST
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I know this would get roses..probably at your feet..it's beautiful..very poetic. I love it.
mary


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:20:03 AM AEST
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oooh
you are the best


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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A truly heartfelt piece of excellence. This is a beautiful write filled with emotion. I loved it. Sue x


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by vampirequeen35 on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 02:01:18 AM AEST
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A master piece is right
awsome snemmy

hugs


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 08:23:37 PM AEST
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yes, Snem, its all in the delivery (including who is delivering it, and the situation). Someone is indeed swept off her feet,

S


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 02:47:40 PM AEST
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this is sweet.
and romantic.
and also very, very, sweet.

the first line was a catcher, and you didnt let me down.

xXx

~kei


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 08:44:05 PM AEST
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Is this true love? Outstanding!!!! Outstanding for you and outstandingly phenomenal that you can write such beauty with such perfection.


Godspeed!

Timbo
:-)


Re: Those Words (A Conversation Opener) (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:03:29 AM AEST
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WOW!!!
I love reading this poem.
..........
WOW!!!!
I cant think of anything poetic to say.
.....
Cool Poem
Nathan




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