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what do you think of this
Contributed by
joe89
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 04:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Have you ever felt like the earth is a street?
And you’re just passing through
Ever felt like your life is worthless
Well there’s something you could do
Become a pop star, make your name
Write a book, invent a game
Life is a test or so they say
Forget tomorrow and start today
For someone whose so afraid of being forgotten
There’s something you should know
You’ve made my life a living hell,
Which ever way you go
Copyright ©
joe89
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2006-09-03 16:04:47]
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Re: what do you think of this
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 05:57:23 PM AEST
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This one, my friend, is rather strange... a good write, nonetheless, but still strange... the anger at the end surprised me, to begin with I thought it was more of a philosophical take on life, and then wham! It hits you like an express train! Great poem,
2sdyx
"The only thing that's permanent is destruction. We are all going to disappear. Trying to leave a mark more permanent than myself. Watch me vanish." - Sarah Kane 4:48 Psychosis |
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Re: what do you think of this
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:41:13 PM AEST
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| Looks like someone's whining self pity got the best of you, Joe. Pretty good poem. |
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Re: what do you think of this
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by Alison on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 08:49:59 PM AEST
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| very sad....but i have been there! keep going strong! good write |
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