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A Haunting Tale
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:28:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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She watched the shadows on the wall,
Heard the rustling on the stair,
Rattling of chains could be heard,.
But no one can she see there,
She heard whispering in the corridors,
But still no one can she see here,
The room it turns a deathly cold,
It fills her full of fear
Then from the corner of her eye,
An Orb is seen to float,
A scream wells up inside her,
But it sticks within her throat
Then a ghostly hand upon her face,
Bring tears too her fearful eyes,
And a voice whispers in her ear,
I have missed you, It is I!
She peers into the darkness,
And then got such a fright,
A flash of lighting struck,
And the room it filled with light,
And standing in front of her,
Stood a man she had not seen for a while,.
The fear that showed upon her face,
Was replaced now with a smile,
It was her dearly departed husband,
The one who had left her so alone,
He said, at last we are to be reunited,
I have come to bring you home,
So this is a love story,
That goes beyond the pale,
A love that was eternal,
Because it was a haunting tale.
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2006-09-03 14:28:17]
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:51:19 PM AEST
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gotta love ghost stories. great write.
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:03:02 PM AEST
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Good work, my friend.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 01:18:37 AM AEST
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| Oh I love this flow |
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 02:18:13 AM AEST
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Great job in this Sue
I really enjoy this alot.
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 10:30:08 PM AEST
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Haunting.. perhaps-
spooky.. a bit-
..a heartfelt memory of your dear husband?
YES!!
fantastic finale Sue~
B |
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Re: A Haunting Tale
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 06:04:10 PM AEST
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Sue, this was splendid!!
so frightening at first, but wow .. what a conclusion !!
beautifully written, my friend. I loved it completely ..
~Breezy |
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