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Contributed by
Tanner
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I touched the sun
but did not burn,
and kissed the moon
while flying by.
I brushed a star
on my return,
then journeyed home
to say goodbye
I drank the sea
but did not drown,
and ate the world
like apple pie
I yelled so loud
it made no sound.
I journeyed home
to say goodbye
I hoarded fears
and squandered mirth
I lived where rules
did not apply.
I walked the air
and breathed the earth.
I journeyed home
to say goodbye
I journeyed home
to say good bye,
to shed my skin,
to face the sky,
to stretch my soul
beyond my heart,
to gather years
that fell apart,
to set afloat
old words and deeds,
to silence all
new melodies,
for one last breath,
a faint goodbye,
to lay to rest
and finally die.
Copyright ©
Tanner
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2003-02-13 02:40:00]
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Re: Home
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 05:41:30 AM AEST
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| fantastic poem... the images are great.. venkat |
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Re: Home
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:40:42 PM AEST
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| beautifully written and sad too................ |
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Re: Home
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:10:03 AM AEST
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Wow! I love the images. The twists and the..... EVERYTHING! This poem rocks!!!! It should win a nobel prize or something.... don't ask me how it could, but is should!! This is great. I really really liked it.
YS |
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Re: Home
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by sunflower on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 04:44:33 PM AEST
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good rhyming and rhythm,
interesting theme and use of , nice stuff |
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