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She Cut Her Curls
Contributed by
silverscent
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 09:05:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Trees of Oak and Chestnut,
at opposing sides of my kitchen,
as I, a leaf, dwell in the centre.
A maiden, see, cut her wig
’till the carpet was adorned with curls,
and grasped within coldness, then
she ripened to step away.
For her, he held his breath,
with respect to the branches; watchful
inclined to lean their way.
His lips and the leaf’s did hug
as platinum was placed upon fingers.
Then the kitchen decorated by time
was left to the newly weds.
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2006-09-03 09:05:49]
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Re: She Cut Her Curls
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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You are very fine poet, my friend-why is it that the best poems are often the ones most ignored?
Wonderful movement of strophes, wonderful ideas, simply wonderful. I'll be checking in on you permanently from now on.
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Re: She Cut Her Curls
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:39:29 PM AEST
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You are an overlooked gem.
This is a wonderful write.
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