|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
this is my curse, this is my sin
Contributed by
ellimac
on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 11:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
the feelings are gone,
but i still call her my babe.
why you may ask, why put myself through this pain.
i want to look you in the eye and tell you,
because i can't find the line between friendship and lust
because i'd rather be miserable than alone
because i still think shes the only one for me
because of the way she still makes me smile and deny the butterflies
because shes changed my life
because she was my first
because i dont want anybody else
but i stay quiet and say i dont know.
i hear a sigh and the line goes dead.
the next morning i awake and decide im going to leave her in the past
we speak and she uses sweet words as her arsenal
i fall in love all over again.
i fall in love too easily, i love too much.
this is my curse, this is my sin.
Copyright ©
ellimac
... [
2006-09-02 23:52:57]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: this is my curse, this is my sin
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I give u 2 thumbs up.
You grabbed me with the title and u took your pain and turned it into this perfect write.
The beauty of it all is that your pain is immortalizing but others will always find healing in this poetic Masterpeice.
huggs, prayers,
emy |
|
|
Re: this is my curse, this is my sin
(User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:24:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very Nice... I believe that pain breeds great words... I know from my experiences that is how I grew to write...
Like they say the blues is nothing but a good man feeling down...
Hold Your head up
"because i'd rather be miserable than alone "
"1 is the loneliest number that you'll ever know" Song lyric... |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
