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Keep it
Contributed by
aniT
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Keep it they say…
Keep it they say….but what if I don’t want it
I don’t want to have it anymore
I want to share and give it to that person
But where are they…
Are they in the place I cant find?
Or have they secretly seen me and changed their mind…
What if the universe makes it so we don’t meet
Where does that leave me?
Alone, crying, depressed
No…not I
I keep myself together….well on the outside
Nobody is to see me weakness
They wouldn’t understand
They have what I don’t
You can call it jealously…you can call it envy
I call it sadness
I think about this person above all else
To be here…To save me…To receive my gift
So…
Keep it they say….I guess I have no choice
-Tina T.
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aniT
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Re: Keep it
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 12:48:58 AM AEST
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For a non writer u can certainly put your thoughts down like a professional!
U've found your calling.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Keep it
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:55:06 AM AEST
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| Shows a lot of vulnerability that most people are afraid to open. Good write. |
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Re: Keep it
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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| Great poem, are you a non writer, well cant believe that reading this. xxx |
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Re: Keep it
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 01:28:36 AM AEST
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you use to be a non writer
well written |
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