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I Really Really Hate You
Contributed by
lancaster
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You are everything a man could want
You embody all that is good and none of what is not
You exemplify the perfect form with a perfect face
You are unmatched and unparalleled among the human race
You remain forever in need with none of you going to waste
You give off a sense of sweetness with a delightful aftertaste
Your uniqueness sets you apart from the ordinary and common place
You are memorable in every facet with attractive assets
In every aspect you personify love with a hint of magic
You embrace your surroundings with open ended arms
You elaborate on the simplest display of spectacular charm
You bring me to my knees with a look that sends a chill through the trees
You bring me peace when needed relief occupies unease
As you pass, sleeping flowers begin an early bloom
As the scent of your hair is heightened by the hint of natural perfume
The mid summer air is cooled and aligned with the repositioned moon
You are a song for God and I pray to one day become your little tune
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Re: I Really Really Hate You
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:29:50 PM AEST
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| I liked this, I really cant say anymore, than i really liked. I loved the flow and use of imagery. |
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Re: I Really Really Hate You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:47:56 AM AEST
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This is very touching, powerfull, pleasing.
A masterpeice of beauty.
smiles,
emy |
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