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AS I
Contributed by
evolon
on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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AS I,
I try to embrace your fear
I cant let you go
my soul wounded from your never cares
Separated,
Unite me
disregard all emotion
evaporated tears give strength
Love, please return my vision
From
The bigining seemed so warm
days pass, seasons change
Cold........
cold as winters night
so dark i cant see
You
I feel the bitter bite
chills tingle the spine
arctic memories frost bite the mind
Suffering
with out YOU in my space
I miss the warmth my heart reached from seeing your face
now to be gone without a trace
surrounded in self pitty!
Im losing it, you held me together
I thought i left weakness as a memory
Exscuse me as i re- acquaint
Control
my every move, emotion
my every thought im all alone
Fearsful, scared to find happiness in another
I stand a statue of a fool made of stone
I wanna love again bigger than you!
Im trying, sloswly dieing, constant crying
just trying to get threw.
All the anguish, pain joy, happiness
of all the things we will never do...
in short i miss you glad your gone!
i hate loving you
Copyright ©
evolon
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2006-09-02 20:43:34]
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Re: AS I
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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this was pretty good, although I feel it could have benifited from a more concise form. I like the last line, and I can tell its a very emotional write for you. Well done.
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Re: AS I
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 12:12:38 AM AEST
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I can certainly relate to this awesome writing.
Most folks will too.
Great work.
huggs, prayers,
emy
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