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I Loved Him, Too
Contributed by
TwistedCage
on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 06:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The bottle beside my bed
taunts my anguish.
The gun pressed firmly against my temple
longs to reunite.
The race is not yet over,
but it could be with a twitch of my finger.
Then, I could join my brother,
and together we could face the other side.
Is it fair for any to go alone?
The great unknown intrigues my curiosity.
Does he need me by his side?
In a fit of drunken rage,
I pull the trigger!
The gun now pointed at the bottle
beside my bed.
Mother runs in screaming.
She see’s me on my knees
howling at the absent moon.
I look in her eyes;
I break down crying.
Terrified and shaking,
she says to me...
“Jamie, I loved him, too”
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TwistedCage
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2006-09-02 06:16:27]
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Re: I Loved Him, Too
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 06:18:06 AM AEST
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| Thats just so sad, im in tears..and you know..how many do wonder..do they need someone on the other side? I like to think there is a God and those we love that have gone before us are angels..and its them who are there for those we love on both sides. |
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Re: I Loved Him, Too
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:50:29 PM AEST
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| Wow. Stunning. Great emotion. Wow. I really can feel it... I'm so sorry for you =( Great write though! |
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