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A Little Closer
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 04:10:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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...And tonight I took the same long path on that darkly lit road
My eyes caught the youth walking along the train tracks
Like I could so easily picture myself
Walking in the moonlight
Walking towards the moon as it sets over city lights
Talking about new feelings
But the framiliar site of houses brings me down
Because for a minute, I was free
I was attached to nothing
The way I always thought I was meant to be
The only comfort I get is that I know it will happen again
Every night if I let it
Maybe next time get a little closer to that moon before it sets again
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2006-09-02 04:10:55]
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Re: A Little Closer
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 04:18:41 PM AEST
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*smiles*
I like the images in this. They're very peaceful.
I have a special sort of love for the moon, so this really drew me in. I like the ending most though. I really love the last two lines.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: A Little Closer
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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| this was good. i really liked this. i have a soft spot for the moon too. :) thank you for sharing. |
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