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Ocean Blessed
Contributed by
TwistedCage
on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:10:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Salty sprays erupt mid-air;
the dancing droplets frolic so fine.
A playful folly and a fall so fair,
it's forever a dance in true sublime.
Rolling waves rip the sandy shore;
locals surf the tubes of deep.
Sun bather’s ad to beach decor,
and seagulls dive in gentle sweep.
An ocean breeze cools the heat,
hiding the burn on snowbird pale;
The locals snicker when they greet
these ghostly figures with skin so frail.
Pictures are taken, and memories made;
the sunsets beauty into a blue caress.
This nightly scene is but a serenade,
to an awe-inspiring ocean blessed.
Copyright ©
TwistedCage
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2006-09-01 00:10:30]
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Re: Ocean Blessed
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:15:27 AM AEST
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How I love the ocean. There is magic and mystery about her. This was such a beautiful nature write. Isn't Mother Earth just grand?
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Ocean Blessed
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by Oneir8dude on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:23:06 AM AEST
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Very nice....
Coming from Iowa I wish I was there...
Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Ocean Blessed
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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What a wonderful description of the ocean's beaches. You painted the view very well. Take care.
sadaddy |
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Re: Ocean Blessed
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by StormyNites on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 03:45:43 AM AEST
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| very nice poem !!!! |
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