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Void
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Silence shuddered in night’s deceptive arms
Memories rose and fell to insane rhythms
There was bliss that smiled for a fleeting lifetime
Which morphed to a viper’s coil spewing rage
At neglect of an absent lover’s selfish memory
Obsessive yearning threaded through insomniac nights
Patterned in the ebb and rush of latent desires
Needs to be met from hasty promises
Hollowed to fruition at lust’s virulent grip
Trysts in creation pulsing their pagan cycles
Scents of life, of a most guarded saga.
Copyright ©
Sasha
... [
2006-08-31 23:55:05]
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Re: Void
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by Oneir8dude on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:04:58 AM AEST
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Heavy!
Thanks for sharing that... I used to be able to write dark poetry... I hope you are in a good place ...
Peace...
Thank You for sharing my friend... |
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Re: Void
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:11:56 AM AEST
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Wow, nicely done and very deep. It makes the reader think. Take care.
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Re: Void
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:31:52 AM AEST
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OOooooo good stuff. I quite enjoyed the intensity of your write. I'd like to quote a favorite line from the piece, but they're all so good.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Void
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 07:12:38 PM AEST
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awesome
my kind of poem
Good job
Alex |
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