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The Dark Parts
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:20:18 PM in AEST
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Rape me, take my soul, my body's clean but im dirty. Problems never work themselves out, my conscience is killing me. Shadows fall on the path taking the place where the light was. Oh the guilt it murders me everytime i try to think. Spreading through my body like a disease. Maybe one day ill be fine but not today or near this time.
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Re: The Dark Parts
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by bigbadblinkybill on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:43:20 PM AEST
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Re: The Dark Parts
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by TwistedCage on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:47:02 PM AEST
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Two tears in a bucket, **** it! (We all have issues)
Loved this write, nirvana! We all fall into dark places from time to time, and you captured this reality very well, imo.
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