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Lost Blade
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
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Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:27:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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dreaming of a death so quick and smooth
taking the knife and knowing just what to do
drag it across your wrist nice and slow
once you see blood then you know
hoping to die and to make it quick
i've seen to much blood now i feel sick
who knows what i can do with a swipe of a blade
once i die my debt is repaid
i just wanna die i can't do this anymore
i can see the devil and he's opening the door
damn it she found the blade
it was laying on the floor
now she see's her loving daughter
is no more
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Tiffyo4
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2006-08-31 12:27:11]
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Re: Lost Blade
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gayla on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:48:29 PM AEST
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| really intense.. i like it =) |
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Re: Lost Blade
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by Karlee14 on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:20:39 PM AEST
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Being a cutter myself, I can say that I understand this poem on a personal level. I really like the emotions you get from reading a poem like this. If you ever need someone to talk to I'm always here =)
.:.Karlee.:. |
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Re: Lost Blade
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by lost_chadow on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:42:38 PM AEST
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| I've been to down to suicide and back and i ain't goin back down that road. I don't want you to either so here's another friend for you to make if u need to talk |
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Re: Lost Blade
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 10:50:05 AM AEST
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| hey lady i don't wanna lose you from my life |
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