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If You Need Me I’ll Be On Memory Lane
Contributed by
Channing
on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:27:33 AM in AEST
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The heater within the car
Releasing such warm air
Unlike the cold storm
That surrounds your existence
And I race on
Trying to get out of this storm
But the rain still falls
Still falls from my eyes
For even the car can’t get me away
From the pain you have caused
Because I can’t believe a word
That flees from your lips
I don’t want to see
A move from your seductive body
For it makes me sick
Ever since it touched him
So I hope you’re happy
And I give you my best wishes
For if you need me
You won’t find me
Not after my car
Flies off the face
Of this cliff
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-08-31 11:27:33]
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Re: If You Need Me I’ll Be On Memory Lane
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:09:28 PM AEST
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great, very sad, but great.
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Re: If You Need Me I’ll Be On Memory Lane
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:47:23 PM AEST
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| ahhh so sad...especially for the car. sorry; I'm in a bad mood tonight. |
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