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Blue Jean Baby Queen
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:26:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Faded
Frayed
A deep shade of blue
Torn up
Tattered
Despite being new
Worn almost each day
Til the fit is just right
Always on the surface of this week's laundry pile
A staple
A classic
It becomes the best pair
Holey
Transparent
Then you find the bad tear
But you can't throw them out
You'll just force you to change
And you'll grieve but you'll try what you just cannot do
They're plain
It's simple
Just find some new pants
New look
New you
Cause they don't stand a chance
They're worn out already
They don't fit at all
And patches won't help them from fraying some more...
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2006-08-31 02:26:05]
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Re: Blue Jean Baby Queen
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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Great write. Your usage of blue jeans was metaphorically wonderful. Thanks for sharing. Love the title too.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Blue Jean Baby Queen
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:47:34 AM AEST
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I like this
well done |
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Re: Blue Jean Baby Queen
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by stripes on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 08:46:05 PM AEST
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| great write, cool title, great comparision to the jeans |
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