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petals
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you ever want me
Just look up to the sky
And I値l be there.
If you ever need me,
Just reach out for my hand
And I値l be there.
If you ever need me to dry your tears
Just call my name
And I値l be there.
If you ever need my love
Whisper
I値l hear you
If it ever feels like you really can稚 get through this
If it ever feels like you致e tasted your last tears, my final kiss
I知 here, and I値l be here when you fall
I値l be the light, hold your hand and pull you through it all
When you want me near, just call
Because I Love You
More than you値l ever know
I値l love you
And never let you let it all go
You and me,
We池e the petals on this beautiful black rose
I Love You.
Copyright ﾂｩ
wyrd_faerie
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2003-02-12 22:20:00]
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Re: petals
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:38:10 PM AEST
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| wow...that's a devoted friendship...well said |
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Re: petals
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by M on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 05:31:35 AM AEST
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| I love you too baby...thank you... |
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Re: petals
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 03:58:37 PM AEST
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| beautiful, simply beautiful... |
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Re: petals
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:12:27 PM AEST
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Lucie this was beautiful I enjoyed this a lot. The 2nd to last line I just loved. Keep on smiling for me... e-mail me if u have the time...
Love you,
Joel |
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Re: petals
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:05:14 PM AEST
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| spectacular and outstanding write:) |
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Re: petals
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by etherealgurl on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 01:55:14 AM AEST
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very refreshing and honest.....so incredible...your ability to stretch from one extreme emotion to the other.....it is easy to write about pain...but takes a special talent to express love in a unique and unfettered way as you have in this poem. It makes me wish i were the one you were writting it for!
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