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Alone
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:28:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I walked the journey of a lonely man…
Over the tombstones where spirits ran…
They were there but flew unseen…
My mind was absent, just a shade of green…
I thought of the one that I think of highly…
I picture her face happy and smiling…
I hear the ticking clock counting every moment I’ve been alone…
If I don’t see her face again I’ll turn to stone…
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oneir8dude
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2006-08-30 23:28:14]
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Re: Alone
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:39:11 PM AEST
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| This is the most beautiful poem . Never stop writing please..I look so forward to reading your poetry. |
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Re: Alone
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:11:06 AM AEST
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Pulled off well..it seems both light and dark at the same time..
an enjoyable read.
mary |
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Re: Alone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:56:14 AM AEST
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wow there is alot of emotion in this.. its short but very powerful. I really like the flow of it too its very well expressed.. I can relate to this poem with my ex awesome job in wording
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: Alone
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by StormyNites on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:58:14 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem...expressive. |
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