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One Heaven One Hope
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 10:03:47 PM in AEST
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If thy grievous heart should ache for human love
And in earthbound solitude should grow dark with fear,
Lest the high Sun of Heaven itself should prove
Powerless to save one fantastic tear,
Wherein thy spirit wandered by flowers
That 'round thy feet seemed but to bloom
In lone gestures through starless hours
When all who loved, left nothing to thy doom,
I believe that in thy hollow vale
Where thee might linger to attain
So much of Heaven's sweetest grace and shall avail
To lift the burden of remorseful pain,
My soul shall meet thee and its time forego,
'Till greatest love on both, one hope, one Heaven to bestow.
Billy
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:14:55 PM AEST
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Great write. billy.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:14:56 PM AEST
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Great write. billy.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:14:57 PM AEST
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Great write. billy.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:18:24 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. What more can I say. Loved it. Sue x |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:23:20 AM AEST
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Shakespear himself could have penned no better. I love traditional excercises such as this-I tend to write contemporary poetry, for example-But I have to confess a secret affection for this kind of writing. It is a style of poetry I am very fond of, if not one I'm capable of mastering myself. Thanks as always,
larkspur |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:48:38 AM AEST
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Billy, Sweet write. Thanks for sharing. (and I must agree with Larkspur)
Peace, Laura |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:34:00 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 06:21:16 PM AEST
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My sweetest .. this sonnet is, what I feel to be, your very best.
So completely perfect, in style, grace AND flow, (not to
mention the sentiment which is stunningly gorgeous!),
it puts the masters to shame.
You outdid yourself with this one, dearest Billy. Truly~
Completely captivated to no end, am I ....
The word "brilliant" is fast becoming over-used where
you are concerned .. so lets just say I'm floored by
the sheer skill and master which you have written this.
Always impressed, always humbled .. and forever touched.
~Breezy |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by JGB on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:52:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
I don't know what to say!
joanna |
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Re: One Heaven One Hope
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 05:40:49 PM AEST
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Dearest Billy, I have neglected your page for far too long, and for that I apologise.
Though, it once again appears to have been my loss. I'm so glad I checked your page out again.
I just read a comment by Ken Moore which names you as one of the 5 masters of words on YPDC... I have to say, I agree with him.
Well done, Billy. This is a lovely write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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