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Cold blue

Contributed by Fiction on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:55:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I fell myself sinking,
deeper into the dark blue,
sometimes I wish,
I was sinking with you

but how can it be?
you never get hurt
you're always faster than me,
when I started first

if it's magic or love,
I don't think I can care,
you think you fell from above,
I say you crawled from down there

but how sinful you seem,
and how bad you taste,
you make me feel clean,
and that's one thing I hate

I love to hate you,
and you know that well.
and I hate to love you,
and that makes you smile

now I'm reaching the bottom,
it's kind of cold down here,
I can see all those rocks,
my heart is full of fear.

I mapped it all out,
for you to understand,
just try to find the end,
it's right below you

now goodbye I wish you well,
I'm ending in the blue,
and for the first time ever,
I'm there before you

Copyright © Fiction ... [ 2006-08-30 11:55:19]
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Re: Cold blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 05:13:46 PM AEST
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Very well done. Alot of people try to write that feeling but very few pull it off that well.

Eternally Punished,
Faust

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