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Untouchable
Contributed by
damagedx3
on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 06:10:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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These lips are cursed
and the taste of vinegar
with each kiss comes tears
This body is damned
and it holes these invisible scars
when touched people run away
The hands are broken,
lonely and worn
trying to fix the unfixable
This heart is shattered
pieces spread apart
unable to rebuild
unable to love
ready to just die.
The thoughts are scrambling
words being written
they make no sense
this makes no sense
Why cry?
Why even care?
I'm the untouchable
the used and the abused
I'm used to it
just like a broken record skipping a beat
"I love you" and "I care"
mean nothing,
they don't exist.
In the world I am lost,
confused, broken, torn.
I just want to be loved is that so hard?
Just want me! Take me!
The tears never stop.
Cry me a river they say,
soon this'll be an ocean
just to drown my soul in.
I'm brokend, damaged, torn.
I'm the untouchable.
Copyright ©
damagedx3
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2006-08-30 06:10:22]
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Re: Untouchable
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 06:50:44 AM AEST
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First off, Welcome. Your poem is filled with great sadness and pain. It flowed very well which allows the reader to want to continue to read. The ending says a lot in itself. Just know this, with time your heart will heal. Take care and may God watch over you and protect you.
I'm broken, damaged, torn.
I’m the untouchable.
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Re: Untouchable
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by sprinter27 on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 09:50:29 AM AEST
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Aw, that's a sad but very powerful write. Great job with it. Just hold on, damagedx3. Life will get better. People will want you and you won't feel so untouchable. I'm throwing you a life-preserver, so grab ahold and float from your ocean of tears to a land of care. Don't give up and life, you were born for a reason, and not to feel untouchable or to give up so quickly. Good write, though, keep up the great work!!
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Re: Untouchable
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:06:39 AM AEST
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wow this is a very sad and powerful write and you know what i can relate to this.. hang in there though if this is how you feel.. there is always a reason for things to end even if we don't understand. what doesn't kill us makes us wiser and stronger.. this is a very beautiful write though thanks for sharing
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